Nice job on the script! You've made all of the necessary corrections and it looks great! 4 points!
Nice job on the video! You sound great and it's easy to follow. The way you shot the phone going into the can was good because now we can hear the difference it makes. Your shots are a little dark though. What happened to the can at the very beginning? It doesn't look very good. I need to see a shot of a clean, nice, can instead of one that was half painted, already cut, and crumpled. I also want you to change that first shot. It's not a good one for showing someone having trash that needs to be thrown away. Is there a reason why you didn't shoot it out side since you show him using the trash can outside? What if you threw away the old chip can? The second shot is blurry. The third shot needs to be longer so we can see what's happening in it better. The binder clip shot is too dark and needs to be redone. Remember how we also need a close up of the face of the person doing the task? If you use one in between the cutting of the can and then the binder clips, you won't have that jump cut like you do. Please add that in as well. In the clip shot, you should also use a cut in close up here like you did when you were throwing away the rubbish. In looking at your shots on the table in your home, you see how you have that reflection coming in from the light that is bouncing off of the table? That's why your shots are so dark. You have that huge light source in the shot which makes your other things in the shot appear darker. I would also love to see you shoot the can from the side so we can see the phone inside of the can. Maybe start that clip where you are holding it above the can and then cut to the side so we can hear what it sounds like outside, and then lower the phone. Seeing it from the side and having the mic there will also make your audio louder which I think will better show the difference the can makes. You also need to have the music continue playing in your last shot. To cut that off to a shot of the phone being off now is weird. Come up with another shot you can use, from another angle to end it with, maybe a shot of you smiling at your new creation.
It's almost there! 3.5 points!
I'm Keith, I'm in 7th grade and this is my second year in media