Overall a very solid, exceptional job. Interview was done very well as it was well lit and audio was excellent. Story was told well but there was just a few things that need attention. His job title is not "tech guy." He's the technology coach. One shot was of the back of his head which was weird. Other than that this was a very well done piece. Be careful on your VO as you sped up at the end. 4 points!
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.